Revision: Is money everything?

     From the past to nowadays, money always be an important role in everybody’s life. Whatever I like it or not, I can’t deny that we need it in almost every moment. It is believe that some people think money can let you get everything you want. But, is it truth? Is money really equal everything?

     First of all, I think that money isn’t everything. Money can let me get food, clothes, house, and everything I need for live. But, something I can’t use it to get. In my opinion, money only can let me live, but it can’t let me feel happiness.

     The second aspect is money can’t satisfied mental live. Some people think that if we had money, we can donated part of it to charity. This is a good point, but I think except you very rich, I don’t think I will share my money to other people. Power and money are the most two of things which can let a person become greedy.

     In conclusion, money isn’t everything. You can use it to get most of things, but you can’t use it to get mental things, such as friendship, love, and happiness.

Revision: Is fashion important?

     Whatever you are old people or young people, every age have their own fashion. It is believe that somebody will chase fashion at any cost. For me, that was very crazy. Now, the question is, fashion is really important to chase?

     I think fashion isn’t very important. Everyone have their own dressing style.

     First, free dressing style. I think that everyone have their own style. I saw many people like to buy clothes which the movie star or singer wore it in the movie or TV shows. I really don’t understand why they would want to buy it. Most of it are expensive and useless. I think we don’t need to chase the other’s style, we can create our own fashion.

     Secondly, fashion may cost very much. Some people will chase their idols, but some people will chase famous brand. Things of famous brand are very expensive. Such as clothes, bag, purse, they all will cost much of money.

To conclude, fashion isn’t very important for life.